I like this one. Nice job.

Hey JB recognise much of myself in your profile statement; don't worry just hang on to life & enjoy the ride, smile & keep em guessing. if that don't work just remember, 1)"Life is just a bowl of all-bran -Small Faces.2)The kids of today are the goats of tomorrow. = 2 maxims that have got mre thus far, mind you folks around here would warn you, listen not to the French dweller, ho hum etc. Where was I, Oh yeh it's a music site is it not, much to like here, apologieqs for missing your fine submissions before I'll be looking for more.

just spent 10 minutes reading your extensive profile (I'm also a slow reader). you seem a bit overly focused on yourself; you should get a volunteer job at a nursing home, it'll change your life. that's a great Pixies song.